Kaname Kuran Valentine

Name: Kaname Kuran Valentine

Title: Pureblood Lord

Specialize: swords,energy,transformation and hand to hand.

Age: 21

Real Age: 450

Love Intrest:

Relationships atheris valentine younger sister

Personality:calm and romantic. when bothered changes into a darker more agressive and final form no feelings or remores.

Look: brown hair with green eyes and pale skin. second form: eyes turn red and half his hair turns white and final form hair turn white and long.

Talents: leader of the last purebloods and peace maker with the shinigami race.

Techniques-:tengo step first form:incredable speed then second power:fear of the weak:starts to transform to second form.
second form:chaotic flames:lights his hands with red flames and blast waves of energy.
final form:merges with two souls within every thing is doubled and uses ultimate attack hell's gate causes the opponent to fear him and lose focus.

Friends:

History:soon to come

Doll Name:obelisk

Doll Personality:ruthless and judgeful with matters in the moment.

Doll Item: a wrist charm with a cross.

Doll Powers: The doll posesses Kaname and acts within his body. When in control, Kaname's speed, reiatsu, and power greatly increase.

Doll Release Appearence: A shadow forms from the Cross and around Kaname's body. He is engulfed, and when it fades a red, almost demonic aura is visable even to those with low spiritual awareness.

Stats-: (20/20)
Strength: 4
Intelligence:5
Speed: 3
Reiryoku: 1
Reishi Absorbsion: 2
Doll Manipulation: 5

Doll Stats-: (20/20)
Strength: 4
Intelligence: 3
Speed: 4
Power(Strength of the dolls special powers): 9

Items in Possession: (Items off the INT List, not anything else. Doll does not count as an Item)

its good to have you here my dear brother"
atheris smiled at him sweetly

Not bad, not bad.

All in all.

Yet, things need changing..

'Everything' cannot be doubled at once. Your a Bount, not a Vaizard. A Bount relies on their doll, while a Vaizard is boosted 2x by their mask. To match a person with Bankai, you're gonna need 30 in Doll Minipulation to even hope to compare. To match someone with Shikai, you're gonna need to release your doll (5+ doll Minipulation.). Techniques what you have at the moment simply aren't possible, and you can't have a technique that even boosts one stat for too long.

Hell, my character, Kenshin Inuzuri, has a technique that boosts the speed of -one strike- by 2x and then can't be used for a day. His Bankai boosts his speed by 2x as long as he is in it, and that cost me one of the five abilities slots you can have in Bankai.

See where I'm going with this? Change it please XD. Can't blame you for being confused if you are, I'm gonna need to start editing Bount info, even though Bryan did a pretty decent job T.T

Next...

Careful how strong you make him out to be. It's fine him thinking himself to be stronger than everyone else. Hell, Masataka does that. But, it doesn't mean its true. Yet! XD

Anyway, I've had my say. Certainly not trying to be mean

Enjoy RP'ing!

PS: If ya' need anything, or simply some help, let me know ^^

Note: Also, If you have a word limit, let either the mods know, or myself, and we can edit what you wish.

Edit: Title added

sorry. i'll make his technique his second doll release. i know he cant do it yet but i wanna keep it there so i remember.